Beautifully written and illustrated story depicting a special moment in a friendship. Coaches encourage interaction and the incredible dictionary gives written, auditory, and visual support to help make meaning of the vocabulary. (Guideline 2.1) Author's voice recording further enhances the emotion of the text. (Guideline 1.2)
Kristin Robinson,
09/13/2010 - 09:37am
I LOVE this book!
Jacob Clark,
04/03/2013 - 11:00am
The book was great, and I wish I had one like it! Kadence
I loved the art! My'ana
I liked the pictures you drew. Kearra.
I liked the writing you did; I wish I can do the same. Jaylynn.
I liked the dress on Lily the Rabbit. Terrance.
The book was funny. Norman.
Paxton the Pig was funny! Timothy.
My class loved the book; we hope to publish a book, too, on Book Builder. Thanks!
Mr. Clark
Writing Club
Edwin Joel Brown PreK-8
Dayton, Ohio
We hope you write back!
Jacob Clark,
04/05/2013 - 01:21am
My writing class of second-graders loved the book, and it has inspired us to write a book of our own to submit to Book Builder. We submitted comments on Wednesday, April 3, and they still have not appeared. The kids are really excited about the possibility of seeing their "reviews" on line. Please post our comments, or let me know why they won't be.
Jacob R Clark
Intervention specialist
Edwin Joel Brown PreK-8 School
Dayton Public Schools
Dayton, OH
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07/25/2010 - 01:01pm
Beautifully written and illustrated story depicting a special moment in a friendship. Coaches encourage interaction and the incredible dictionary gives written, auditory, and visual support to help make meaning of the vocabulary. (Guideline 2.1) Author's voice recording further enhances the emotion of the text. (Guideline 1.2)
Kristin Robinson,
09/13/2010 - 09:37am
I LOVE this book!
Jacob Clark,
04/03/2013 - 11:00am
The book was great, and I wish I had one like it! Kadence
I loved the art! My'ana
I liked the pictures you drew. Kearra.
I liked the writing you did; I wish I can do the same. Jaylynn.
I liked the dress on Lily the Rabbit. Terrance.
The book was funny. Norman.
Paxton the Pig was funny! Timothy.
My class loved the book; we hope to publish a book, too, on Book Builder. Thanks!
Mr. Clark
Writing Club
Edwin Joel Brown PreK-8
Dayton, Ohio
We hope you write back!
Jacob Clark,
04/05/2013 - 01:21am
My writing class of second-graders loved the book, and it has inspired us to write a book of our own to submit to Book Builder. We submitted comments on Wednesday, April 3, and they still have not appeared. The kids are really excited about the possibility of seeing their "reviews" on line. Please post our comments, or let me know why they won't be.
Jacob R Clark
Intervention specialist
Edwin Joel Brown PreK-8 School
Dayton Public Schools
Dayton, OH
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